There is a girl who is always quiet. 【很簡單的一句，直接用 There is a （very）quiet girl即可，用不着使用從句】She likes walking alone along the narrow roads in the countryside.She feels cool when she is walking in the open air.She often looks at the moon.The moon is bright and beautiful, she thinks.She likes staying in her own room alone.She thinks， it”s very wonderful.She usually read novels there.　 【這一段關於小女孩的介紹很好，也沒有什麼語法錯誤。】　

　　She has many hobbies.For example,she likes playing violin,and she can play it very well.So she often loses herself in her music .She likes singing english songs.It”s good for her english and music. 【這兩句可以用從句表達 She likes singing english songs for(or because) it”s good for her english and music.】　

　　I love her,because she is me.

作者：?墼??Sんī?