On this day, we had a class of composition comment and appraise, to comment on the last picture composition. The teacher let some of the writing is good students read their articles, and then analysis step by step, where he writes well, beauty which words to write, even writing method. The students can concentrate one's attention on, also nodded. The teacher said that not only people who write well, also compare the end several students write. The students each have a style each, hearing this, feel funny the students write, listen to that, think that the same learning to write beautiful harmonious. It is worth! Although the composition of my writing is not the best, but I know that knowledge is infinite., mountains beyond mountains, someone outside the person! From the composition of the other students, I also learned many skills and methods of writing, such as: use some remarkably like the true word, also can use some of the words,...... Listen to their writing, like to read an article, can from inside the accumulation of many good sentence. The teacher said composition with some parallelism, rhetorical question...... Some special statement will make your writing more interesting. Class of commenting on the composition, is not only a vivid and interesting class, or a just the heart the lessons, I benefited a lot from. I will continue to strive, strive for more than writing than I good students! I'm ready!

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