以下是我給叔叔的信　

Dear Jack,　

　　How are you doing? It is so nice to read your　

mail again. 　

　　Today I see a so lovely lamb at the zoo, I feed　

it some water and leaves. And I hold it. It”s so　

soft, I love it very much. I see a dog, it is bark　

to me. I”m so afraid. I think it is so angry.　I see　

a giraffe,too.Its neck is very long! Do you like　

these animals?　

　 Love ,　

　 Dolly　

以下是叔叔的回信　

Hi! Dolly,　

I am doing well.　Thank you!　

Wow!　you saw so many lovely animals　at the zoo. You　

had a good time! Where is the zoo?　I don”t think it　

was the zoo inside Zhong Shang Park, because it would　

be very difficult for that zoo to take a giraffe.　I　

always like nature.　I always try to visit zoos,　

botany or aquariums whenever I can.　I enjoy watching　

animals or fish.　

I want to change your sentences a little bit:　

"a so lovely lamb", changed to "a very lovely lamb" or　

"a lovely lamb".　

"it is bark to me", changed to "it barks at me".　

Love, Jack

作者：汕頭市實驗學校學